Umm, hello. The entries in this journal are for alasbabylonrp and not theendisblip. My entries for that comm are...in the main comm. Just so you know. >>'

That said, this is my concrit post. Feel free to tell me (anonymously or signed) what you think of my Ed. I'm always open to criticism :)

This place continues to make no sense.

I have a feeling that girl Ciri knows something. Not sure if I should ask right now, because she's taking this harder than anyone else I know. Including me.

Gotta figure out how to link up with the other people here, if there are any. Maybe they might know what the hell is going on here.

Found some nice people. They call themselves Ciri and Sora. They're from other worlds.

...

Speaking of which, what kinda jumped-up freakhouse is this? I've grown used to the zombies I guess, but it pisses me off that I have no clue what this is all about.

I still have no clue where I am, but at least I know there are people here now. I'm not sure if I can trust them, but I guess since Al isn't here I'm going to have to take a chance. In a place like this, I'm not sure I can stay by myself.

I wish Al was here. Or Winry. Even that bastard Colonel would be alright; at least I'd have someone to hurl insults at instead of trying to feel people out.

...And why the hell do I have my old coat and automail here anyway?
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So, I have no clue where I am, or why I woke up here with my coat and automail again...or why I'm writing down notes in this journal. I guess old habits die hard? I don't know, I guess this place is warped enough to make me want to take notes.

Am I dead? Does that mean it worked? This place certainly looks like hell, and smells like it too. Kinda cold, though. I keep thinking this is a dream, but then I hear weird, distant shuffling sounds and moaning...and I can't explain why, but it terrifies me into believing this is real. So far I've been able to run fast enough to lose it.

Dammit...this place feels wrong. I don't know what sort of higher power I royally pissed off, but-

...Wait, I think I hear something. I'm going to check to see what it is.


WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?! D-
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